Peer Revision

      Peer revision would be more valuable to me if my partner would be very honest with me no sugar coating anything. I state that because I want my partner to let me know where I am wrong and tell me or give me examples of what I could do. I understand sometimes that it can be hard for someone to take in the information they are willing to give us because sometimes people get offensive about their paper and, I myself will not unless it sounds ridiculous for me to try to change my simple error if there is one. Last but not least I just want to have a good paper so most likely if someone points out a mistake I would appreciate it because it will benefit me in my grade.